BEG TO DIFFER part 2 is up

[rabid1st]

A Rabid promise is as good as her word. ;-D And her Beta Babe is a wonder, too. Part two of Beg to Differ is up and the fic is now able to stand as PWP. If, you were waiting for it to be porn...go READ!

Also, if you want more...let me know and I will give it some consideration...no promises on that though as I already have a number of works in progress (as I am sure you are all aware)!

So...this is S/B/A...and now NC-17...and there is SLASH...though minimal because that isn't what this is about...it is about finding a way for S/B/A to just get along.

Find part two here:

http://www.geocities.com/rabid1st/begtodiffer02.htm

Find part one off my fic page.

Hope you all have a joyous holiday season...I'm off to work on more Ichnobate.

Rabid/Raeann

Comments

Re: What you mean "technical", Gobi?

[gobi-rex.livejournal.com]

By 'technical' I meant the choice of words and the absence of emotion: this is how it looks (Spike's poor purple member, for example... my eyes! my eyes!), this is where it goes, this is the sound it makes. Some parts read almost like a manual. Of course, there's some fanfic where the love scenes are so confusingly written that it takes a while to figure out what exactly is going on. So the precise descriptions can be a plus.

I was paying more attention in this one to the observingness...trying to describe the action, rather than the explaining the emotional impact which I usually concentrate on, because I wanted to give the reader that Angel eye view.

It makes perfect sense now, Rae, thanks for clarifying this. I've reread some parts and it's obvious that it's from Angel's POV and it's actually perfect.