BEG TO DIFFER part 2 is up

[rabid1st]

A Rabid promise is as good as her word. ;-D And her Beta Babe is a wonder, too. Part two of Beg to Differ is up and the fic is now able to stand as PWP. If, you were waiting for it to be porn...go READ!

Also, if you want more...let me know and I will give it some consideration...no promises on that though as I already have a number of works in progress (as I am sure you are all aware)!

So...this is S/B/A...and now NC-17...and there is SLASH...though minimal because that isn't what this is about...it is about finding a way for S/B/A to just get along.

Find part two here:

http://www.geocities.com/rabid1st/begtodiffer02.htm

Find part one off my fic page.

Hope you all have a joyous holiday season...I'm off to work on more Ichnobate.

Rabid/Raeann

Comments

[gobi-rex.livejournal.com]

Weee! This was very nice and uhmmm... different. I don't remember the last time I've read some quality Spuffy smut, but there's something different about this one and it's not Angel's presence. If I remember correctly, and please forgive me if I don't, your previous writing wasn't quite this 'technical'. Not that it bothers me. It's just different. On second thought, nevermind, it's probably my general forgetfulness... like I said, I haven't read Spuffy smut in a while.

As I was reading the second installment, I couldn't resist highlighting my favorite bits. By the time the trio reached the room, however, I decided not to divert my attention on highlighting :wink:

The three of them were sandwiched together, between the curb and the Miata. Their proximity continued to alarm the roadster. Flailing against the Slayer's grip, Spike elbowed into Angel's gut. Attempting to strike back, Angel bounced off Buffy's hip. Luckily, the twenty pounds she'd put back on since leaving Sunnydale cushioned his delicate parts. He helped her subdue Spike and she eventually established a firm grasp on the young drip's duster.

I was wondering how you'd make this work, from a logistics perspective, and I think congratulations are in order. It worked marvelously.

"I thought you two were fighting," Angel pouted, staring in amazement, and grudging appreciation, at what could only be described as public foreplay. "She's a user," he reminded Spike. "He's a bonehead," he prompted Buffy, "plus he's judgmental, yelling at you like that. And he has stupid hair. He must get up in the morning and think, which is it today – Ken doll or Brillo Pad."

Love this.

Maybe I could buy one of those personal white noise gizmos or chant something over and over in my head.

Hee!

The vampire saw her shift gears smoothly, going from weak-kneed ingenue to practiced dominatrix.

I like how we get to see two different faces of Buffy. I never really thought about it, but I think it's very much in character.

What you mean "technical", Gobi?

[rabid1st.livejournal.com]

Are you talkin' about the actual placement of body parts? Or the sheer naughtiness of the event...? Or are you speaking of my choice of the more visceral words...like the C-word...and the other C-word? I was paying more attention in this one to the observingness...trying to describe the action, rather than the explaining the emotional impact which I usually concentrate on, because I wanted to give the reader that Angel eye view.

I am also glad you liked the two faces of Buffy...that was an essential part of this fic working for me. I just can't write fic that my characters won't endorse and everytime I would angle in on this idea one of them would balk. Spike was especially not into sharing...but I figured he would do it to keep Buffy around. Angel has this family thing and figures both B&S belong to him. But I felt the Buffy we knew with Spike wouldn't want Angel...I mean, she's going to have a much deeper connection with Spike...but then...there was the EOD kiss...so, I thought...there are TWO Buffy's...one that is all passionate and powerful and one that is a little girl with hopes of having a Prince Charming rescue her. And so it came together.

Now...about this word: TECHNICAL?

Rae ;-D

Re: What you mean "technical", Gobi?

[gobi-rex.livejournal.com]

By 'technical' I meant the choice of words and the absence of emotion: this is how it looks (Spike's poor purple member, for example... my eyes! my eyes!), this is where it goes, this is the sound it makes. Some parts read almost like a manual. Of course, there's some fanfic where the love scenes are so confusingly written that it takes a while to figure out what exactly is going on. So the precise descriptions can be a plus.

I was paying more attention in this one to the observingness...trying to describe the action, rather than the explaining the emotional impact which I usually concentrate on, because I wanted to give the reader that Angel eye view.

It makes perfect sense now, Rae, thanks for clarifying this. I've reread some parts and it's obvious that it's from Angel's POV and it's actually perfect.