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LET ME REPEAT THAT...SPOILERS...TO THE VERY END...

Everybody is doing one of these...this is mine. I'm sure I am adding nothing new to the abundance...but hey, storytellers have a sort of compulsion...

DOOMSDAY CODA
By Rabid1st
Rating: PG
Spoilers: S2 – Doomsday
Un-betaed


Summary: Some stories just aren’t finished and you can’t leave them like that.

Disclaimer: You don’t need a disclaimer if the people in charge don’t finish the story.



On one side of the void it took 328 years and five regenerations. On the other side it took about 37 seconds. Jackie and Mickey heard it first. They were both so used to listening for it, responding to it like Pavlov’s Dogs. For Rose it was part of the background noise of her life. She tuned it out. Her first indication of something happening was her mother stiffening in her arms.

Jackie pulled back and looked beyond Rose. Looking over her mother’s shoulder, Rose saw Mickey running toward them, pointing and yelling. And then she heard it. Behind her, she heard the grating groan of it over the shushing of the surf and the erratic hammering of the wind on her ear drums. The TARDIS. She whipped around to see it arrive.

It materialized on the same spot where he’d just been standing. Unlike him, it didn’t just seem solid. It was solid, real. It sank into the sand. A wave splashed up its blue paneled side. Rose gave a little strangled cry. Jackie clutched at her, a final desperate plea but to no avail. The door opened and he stepped out. Hands in pockets, broad smile fixed on his face, he took a long breath of sea air and waited for her to come to him. Rose tore free of her mother’s arms and ran for his.

He looked the same. He looked exactly the same. And that hadn’t been easy to do. None of it had been easy to do. Not reinventing the Arc of Infinity from rumors, his vague memories of school lectures and scraps of ancient texts. Not restoring the Time Lords one at a time, starting with his dear friend, Romana, and ending with his worst enemy, the Master. Not bargaining his way into permanent exile. But the truth was. When it came right down to it. He hated being interrupted.

“As I was saying,” he said when Rose got within range. “Rose Tyler, I…”

She interrupted him, of course.

But he didn’t really mind. They had time now. Time enough for him to catch her, hold her and sweep her around in three and a half giddy circles. Time enough to endure her shower of kisses and to revel in the happy groan she always gave when he squeezed her. They even had time for the little things like setting her away at arms’ length and studying her tear-streaked, mascara-smeared face.

She looked exactly the same. Felt exactly the same. Exactly as he remembered. And that he knew was the most amazing miracle of them all.

Memories paled, dimmed. But for 328 years, through five regenerations he’d held onto this. The feel of her in his arms. This image. Her beautifully plain face turned toward his. The memory of her had endured through countless encounters with other companions, beautiful women, captivating men and enchanting alien seductresses. The pain of this loss never lessened. The light in her eyes never faded.

This was the woman he loved. And he’d finally come home to her.

He cupped her face in his hands and drew her into a long, deep kiss…a kiss full of promises, full of sunrises they would share together and children they would have.

And then as they melted apart, he took a deep breath and said…”Rose Tyler, I…” He choked on the power of it, trembled from the wash of it through his soul and broke off unable to go on. He couldn’t believe it. He’d come so far. Waited so very long to finish his thought. Tears veiled his view of her, almost as if she was fading away again. He took another shuddering breath and looked to her for help.

“You love me, yeah?” She said in an offhand way.

Still gently weeping he beamed and nodded happy agreement before burying his face in the curve of her throat. In the welcoming warmth of her arms, he whispered the words over and over into her ear.

THE END

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Date: 2006-07-09 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] malaleen.livejournal.com
Gah, first [livejournal.com profile] wendymr writes a wonderful and plausible reunion fic, and now I see one from you as well. Terrific ficlet, enjoyed every word of it.

I hope this means you muse didn't die after yesterday's finale?

Nope...she's alive and kicking...

Date: 2006-07-10 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
...and screaming and gnashing her teeth and demanding access to the computer. First, she thinks she can do a better job on "forever"...but also...she's shown me that RTD did a fantastic job setting up this whole season to let us know there is no way either Rose or the Doctor will let go of their "forever."

So...as I will show in a short essay...I still have hope. I have the wish that my hope can feature Tennant and Piper in the reunion roles.

Rae

Re: Nope...she's alive and kicking...

Date: 2006-07-10 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] malaleen.livejournal.com
I actually thought of you and your fic Disheveled during the good bye scene from Doomsday. When they talked about the baby, all I could remember was your hints about what could happen in your story. Which of course, made me hope and pray your muse cooperated enough to write out such an idea.

Yeah...I liked that baby moment...the look...

Date: 2006-07-10 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
...on the Doctor's face...a mixture of hope and sadness...like he was happy for her but heartbroken at the same time. Or...we could take it to mean (as I probably will...that she's could be pregnant by him). I think RTD again did a marvelous job showing us Mickey standing by Rose and yet not phasing her at all romantically...they are NOT sleeping together...she's sleeping alone.

The baby talk...to me...along with the "Still have Mickey" before and the "Back working in the shop...shut up" after...were Rose's way of telling him she wasn't going to ever go back to the way things were and live happily ever after without him. She's working at Torchwood and she doesn't care if they shatter two universes to be together (Okay, yes...she does...she would never do that...but she obviously isn't going to give up on a reunion with him).

Rae

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Date: 2006-07-09 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rainblows.livejournal.com
:')


wonderful as usual. omg, just to see him again must have been so amazing for rose. wonderful, wonderful little ficlet. <33

i'm not ashamed to admit that i cried for like an hour during and after the episode last night. i hope rose comes back in season 3 in some form just to even get some closure for the poor girl. :'( :'(

See? This is my job for Disheveled...

Date: 2006-07-10 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
To give them their "forever" and I have a way (actually three ways) to do that...must pick one.

But the heartbreak of losing Rose (Billie) is really telling on me. I know for sure however that there is no way Rose or the Doctor wouldn't be working on a way to get back together. That's what they do.

Rae

Re: See? This is my job for Disheveled...

Date: 2006-07-11 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] webeh.livejournal.com
Without a doubt we'll see Rose again. I'm just feeling that confident because the Rose/Doctor storyline in Doomsday didn't feel like a permanent end. It was actually pretty optimistic, all things considering. For one thing, Rose/Doctor never actually said goodbye (Ex. "Goodbye, My Mary-Jane"), which I think is pretty significant. Instead, the pair ran out of time and the Doctor's confession got cut off.

I've been pondering a couple (popular) theories:

1. There is a Doctor in her universe and she starts to travel with him.
2. There are human versions of all of the Doctor's reincarnations. Rose meets a human version of Ten and gets the settled down life with him she always fantasized about. (Now, I'm imagining the poor guy's reaction if the Doctor ever does reappear. He'd have to compete with that.)
3. Rose being part of Torchwood is significant. She use their resources to find a way back to the Doctor. Afterall, the alternate version were the ones who figured out how to jump worlds. So, it's likely that they're more advanced.

Yes, not saying "Good-bye" is significant

Date: 2006-07-21 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
As for the popular theories you mention...

1. Almost certainly there IS a Doctor in that universe...because there IS a Torchwood. And we know there wouldn't be a Torchwood without the Doctor. Another thing that goes with this is the idea of Time Lords in general. The Doctor said, "When the Time Lords were in power you could pop between universes, home in time for tea." Who says they don't have Time Lords over there in Pete's World?

2. Not a fan of this theory on two counts. First, I don't think that the Doctor's look is anything but what it is...a cellular regeneration...same soul, same mind...new body. I know there are lots of fanwanked theories but in canon...Time Lords can regenerate and we know it is something that is peculiar to them rather than to their species (so human Time Lords could regenerate too...in theory). Second, Rose never really shows a great urge to settle down...only mentioning it when they are trapped with no TARDIS...and even there...she just throws out the idea...You might say she was a little wistful in Army of Ghosts when she said, "The Doctor never will so I can't." And she certainly wanted her family unit of mother, father and Rose to be complete. But she always seemed fairly suited to traveling with the Doctor and happy to be there.

3. I like this theory, too. And it is likely that something at Torchwood would help Rose contact the Doctor. I think that he specifically warns her against doing anything stupid when he tells her "You can't" when she asks if she will ever see him again. It was an odd thing to say there...more of a warning than a "I'm sorry, no." Saying, "You can't"...indicates there are WAYS but you can't/shouldn't use them. It practically implies..."Let me work on this, honey...'cause maybe I can."

Rae
who has two other ways for Rose and the Doctor to reunite...which I'm glad aren't being chatted around.

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Date: 2006-07-09 06:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] fishsanwitt
Simply lovely. Thank you.

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Date: 2006-07-10 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Simply...thank you!

I hope it helps you feel a little better.

Rae

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Date: 2006-07-09 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] binah1013.livejournal.com
Sigh. 'tis lovely.

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Date: 2006-07-09 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alyl.livejournal.com
But the truth was. When it came right down to it. He hated being interrupted.

Hee. Damn right, the only thing that can interrupt him is Tyler women Rose and that includes supernova influenced time faults closing between dimensions. Lovely.
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
...as well as breaking his heart. He burned up a sun to say goodbye to her...but instead of saying goodbye she said she loved him and I think that will make the difference in his giving up or getting back to her in the end. Honestly, I don't see them going down this romantic path with the Doctor and someone else...which means...his someone...is Rose. And she's in a different dimension...preserved from anything in his dimension...they won't cross time lines or anything...and he can...and I believe will return to her.

Thanks for the feedback...I loved it.

Rae
ext_10182: Anzo-Berrega Desert (Boom baby Greed!)
From: [identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com
Honestly, I don't see them going down this romantic path with the Doctor and someone else...which means...his someone...is Rose.

YES.

I doubt they'll go down the romance path again, or if so it'd be like the 12th or 13th regeneration. But even then, I don't see it. Even though my heart is breaking, I'm looking forward to buddy stuff-- anything more shippy would feel like it was too soon. Although (and I doubt they'll go this route), if they did want to show him being sexually involved with someone that wouldn't bother me; it's just that they made the Rose relationship so romance-focused that another out and out romance would be weird.

Yeah...the romance angle is counterproductive

Date: 2006-07-21 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
For Doctor Who...as RTD says in the confidential...eventually you would have to break them up anyway. And I think we established with TEN and Reinette that he could have a steamy, affair type romance without having it influence his attachment to Rose. Though, I doubt they will do something like that this coming season...unless they bring back Romana...and I would think in that case we would only get this UST sort of set up to some future encounter.

I, too, am looking forward to the buddy relationship again. It has been so successful for them in the past and I see no reason why that can't continue. People will ship anyway. People shipped the Doctor in the past with everyone and he barely registered sexually. Tennant practically vibrates with sexuality so I don't think they will need to write anything the least bit suggestive to have NC-17 fanfic mushrooming all over the web. But the main reason they probably won't do it again is the focus of the show is family hour action/adventure. The primary audience wants the Doctor to keep his shirt on and his hands to himself in canon...which works well for Rose/Doctor shippers.

And to have an iconic couple...that's book serial and even feature film money in the bank. Shippers will pay for that...long for a reunion...while the casual viewers go on watching the continuing adventures on the telly, not caring if they ever see the Doctor hug someone again.

Rae

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Date: 2006-07-09 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarichan.livejournal.com
That was beautiful, as always. :) I actually feel much less moody about the breaking up of the Doctor and Rose after reading this. Good old hope. Always was my favourite emotion. :D
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
...I am going to post a hopeful entry soon called Signs & Portents...to show how RTD means for us to understand this isn't the end of Rose and the Doctor.

Meanwhile...glad you are feeling a little better after reading this. Thanks for the feedback.

Rae

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Date: 2006-07-10 02:27 am (UTC)
ext_10190: Doctor Who's Rose smiling (David Tennant - Glasses)
From: [identity profile] bailunrui.livejournal.com
And I love you, Rae. Gosh... *adds this to her mental canon of the show*

Thanks for the luv

Date: 2006-07-10 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
:squeezes you:

It is canon...it is. Because of all the canon bits that came before it.

But just for good measure...I'm hoping to give you another way out in Disheveled.

Rae

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Date: 2006-07-10 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitmarlowescot2.livejournal.com
"What ???, What?? What???" Hmph...some cliffhanger.

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Date: 2006-07-10 07:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildecate.livejournal.com
Tastic. As a rule I'm steering clear of post Doomsday fics but couldn't resist one of yours and of course I wasn't let down. Is there anything he won't do for her?

Nope, Cate...I don't think there is....

Date: 2006-07-12 01:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
...which is why I got over this cliffhanger so easily. Because...it WAS a cliffhanger. The context of the show and the nature of both of these characters indicates that there is more story to come after. They will find a way to get back to each other...even if it takes 328 years.

When she asks if she will ever see him again...he says YOU can't...with an emphasis on the YOU and CAN'T that pretty much says, "don't do anything stupid let me work this out."

Rae

Re: Nope, Cate...I don't think there is....

Date: 2006-07-12 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildecate.livejournal.com
Yep, I picked up on that as well.

How can we cross the dimensional barrister? Let me count the crossover ways :-D

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Date: 2006-07-10 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I've watched Doomsday twice now... cried both times (second time got hit on the head with a roll of kitchen paper and told to grow up)...

Would like to throttle RTD... but at the same time would like to thank him as my muse seems to have suddenly returned from the vacation she has been on since forever...

I hope we get to see a reunion... if not, we have yours... send it to RTD!

Morgana

xxx

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Date: 2006-07-11 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellycatinoz.livejournal.com
Thank you tahnk you thank you. That is much better. I love how you made it a quest for him.
Ginormous cookie from me. *****

You know...I have no doubt...

Date: 2006-07-12 01:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
...that if he's not on a quest now...he will be. :nibbles on your ginormous cookie for moment: :swallows: You know, I also think this bride situation may play into the quest. I have no spoiler details just a vague idea...but what if the bride is being kept from her groom? That would explain her little squeak of frustration and her anger. I think if the Doctor worked to solve that sort of problem then he might move a little past his grief and start thinking about solving his own problem.

Rae

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Date: 2006-07-11 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beadattitude.livejournal.com
Yes, that's the stuff.

328 years. Oh, the sweetheart.

Thanks, I needed that.

Date: 2006-07-13 02:32 am (UTC)
ext_10182: Anzo-Berrega Desert (Ahiru & Fakir hands embrace)
From: [identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com
::huggles this fic like a warm huggable thing::

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Date: 2006-07-20 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myriad69.livejournal.com
OH this wee story makes me feel so much better after the heartbreak of Doomsday. It IS canon for me. The Doctor has never let ANYTHING get in the way from saving Rose/being with Rose and I don't see how a wee little dimentional problem would stop him now.

Thank you so much for this.

You are so right...

Date: 2006-07-21 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
...which I think RTD knows, too. The reason I think he knows this is that he gives Rose a ready-made boyfriend/husband/lover in Mickey in the new world but then definitely makes it clear that Rose will not be moving on from the Doctor. She and Mickey aren't sleeping together...it's not their baby...she still loves her Doctor.

I think the Doctor hoped she would move on...simply settle for Mickey. Not because he doesn't care but because he wanted her to have the life and family she'd always dreamed of. Which is very sweet and loving of him. But in the end...we see she will be waiting for her Doctor. That final "I love you" says it all.

I seriously doubt he will let her down. As you say...it's only a problem...he will solve it eventually.

Will we see the reunion? Maybe...maybe not. That all depends on how long the show runs, I suppose. And how much say RTD has in the product...because the Doctor is an icon and must go on for future generations. But I, honestly, think this scenario is what was in the back of RTD's mind, too.

Rae

re: DOOMSDAY CODA

Date: 2006-07-26 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] acciochocolate.livejournal.com
And now you have made me tear up and start crying again, but with happiness. Short, sweet, simply to the point. :) Thank you for writing this.

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Date: 2006-08-01 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bethtaurichick.livejournal.com
Perfect. Absolutely perfect. *sniffle* That was a happy sniffle, not like the sobbing at the end of Doomsday. Thanks for making it better with your wonderful fic :)

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Date: 2006-08-05 03:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miladyhawke.livejournal.com
This is just beautiful.

I do hope you're right about what the future may hold, and I refuse to believe he just gives up on her.

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Date: 2008-06-29 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amybtvsfreak.livejournal.com
*swoons*
(now, back to watching part 2 of confidential. LOL)

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