PIXILATED PART TWO...is up...

[rabid1st]

...yes...it's been a long...looooong time! There were two hurricanes and no power for a week and then there's the arm issue...but no more excuses...

Finally...PIXILATED PART 2 the R-Rated part of my Willow/Tara fic is ready. And there is a brand new Spuffy Infidelity Page to host it.

FIND PART ONE AND TWO HERE

Hope you all enjoy it!

Comments

[gobi-rex.livejournal.com]

Overhead signs pointed out the path in this enchanted forest, informing her that she was in Bound Periodicals.

Satin underwear and bookstacks. Who knew it could be a lethally hot combination. I also like the details, like Willow's bright ;) sweater tucked between the books and imaginaryWillow wearing one shoe.

She might be pixilated but she wasn't gay. Any gayness that happened would require Tara's cooperation.
and
global guidebook for sex Hee!

Femslash is not my thing, but this is incredibly well-written and it captures my attention. Well, duh, this is Rabid's writing.

I couldn't help but think of vampWillow while reading about pixilatedWillow.

You caught me Gobi...

[rabid1st.livejournal.com]

...I used vampWillow as my model. Willow is always shown timid but it seemed to me that Tara brought out a more assertive side of her. And Tara was painfully shy at all times so when I sat out to write this I thought Willow should take the lead. And the only time we saw sexually assertive Willow prior to this was when she was vamped.

Glad you liked the part you liked, too...as it gave me fits...I had to rework it several times to carry just a touch of Tara's fears about the encounter while still allowing the encounter to happen. Z, my beta babe, was on my case to the very end about my using a certain cliche to carry the idea off. I finally did listen to her and scrapped the cliche...because she was right. She and Caia are the best thing for my writing since the wordprocessor.

Rae

[thisficklemob.livejournal.com]

Mm, yes, very nice. (I'm using my femslash icon.) I can't remember exactly how this chapter went before, and it's lost to the great computer crash of '04, but I think you streamlined out some of Tara's thinking and tweaked the action, which I think were good choices. And it was quite hot, even though I'm having a het week. ;)

[keswindhover.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much Rae! It was well worth the wait.

You made both Tara and Willow cute and appealing, and caught their speech pattens, while still poking a little fun at them. You made some sly librarian jokes, as I hoped. You mocked Spike, and you gave me hot girl action. Money well spent, I feel.

A few favourite lines:

A sudden clattering caused her to shoot a sharp glance over her shoulder. Satisfied that the noise wasn’t a professor with tenure she continued addressing the girls. Snerk. University librarians, eh?.

“Oh, wouldn’t I?” Spike sneered. He tapped his chest. “Evil, remember? The way I see it, the Slayer and me were engaged. Once the bans have been read, I reckon it’s okay to start milking the cow.”

“You touch Buffy’s…cow and you’ll regret it,” Willow said. Love your comic dialogue.

Could they rely on the kindness of strangers, given Willow’s state of mind and resultant state of undress?

Tara didn’t think they could. I fear she may have been right.

A tiny groan escaped Tara’s lips. She turned her face into Willow’s neck and thrilled to the string of light kisses Willow dropped along the curve of her jaw.

“Made you wet,” Willow said, stirring silken blond hair with her words. Guh. Off to my bunk now.

My mistress is pleased...

[rabid1st.livejournal.com]

...Joy cometh in the morning with the breaking day. I don't know Joy but I heard that about her.

Anyway...I promise I will give you a prologue with all that morning after angst and happy...but first I must update SSAU before the people with pitchforks make it over my moat. ;-D

Rae
thanking you for giving me a challenge that inspired and thanking my beta babes for not letting me take any cliched routes out of the woods.

Make that an EPI-logue...

[rabid1st.livejournal.com]

...because it will be coming after...not before like PRO-logues. See how hard it must be for me to write under these stressful conditions?

Rae

Re: Make that an EPI-logue...

[keswindhover.livejournal.com]

LOL. I did wonder, as I read that sentence. But I decided you must be doing some really clever time travelling stuff in your PRO-logue, and I should just sit back and admire an artist at work.