I read the first four chapters a few months ago, but then life went topsy-turvey. Now I want to make sure I leave a comment!
I find your 'universe' interesting--how you work with Ten's regeneration and how this resolves into the Meta-crisis Ten and how it leaves behind a somewhat infantile Eleven (I found your explanation of your story, which is actually how I found my way back to your story! You had included a link for someone in the comments. Thanks for that!) You're right -- your explanation does let us see Eleven in a better light. It gives him more room to "grow", so-to-speak. Meanwhile I look forward to seeing Ten learn and grow through his own by accepting a more "human" life. I'm also fascinated by the thought of what all these myriad offspring are going to look like. My imagination is coming up with all sorts of peculiar images...
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I find your 'universe' interesting--how you work with Ten's regeneration and how this resolves into the Meta-crisis Ten and how it leaves behind a somewhat infantile Eleven (I found your explanation of your story, which is actually how I found my way back to your story! You had included a link for someone in the comments. Thanks for that!) You're right -- your explanation does let us see Eleven in a better light. It gives him more room to "grow", so-to-speak. Meanwhile I look forward to seeing Ten learn and grow through his own by accepting a more "human" life. I'm also fascinated by the thought of what all these myriad offspring are going to look like. My imagination is coming up with all sorts of peculiar images...