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Here we go. Here we go.

This means war. War is hell. What the F***!

Give me liberty. Give me death.

Keep it simple. Shake it up.

I love you. We are through.

I’m just kidding. We are one.

Time is fleeting. Yes, it is.

I love words. As a writer, they are the tools of my craft. As a poet, I play with them. I don’t know when I first became fascinated by them, but there is actual evidence that I’ve been a poet since childhood. I offer you my first poem:

The cat sat on a mat.

The cat saw a rat.

I want that

said the cat.


It doesn’t scan very well, I know, but I was only in the second grade when I wrote it. I have, also, begun to suspect it isn’t very original. But the point I am making here is that words are a big deal to me and always have been. Words can wound. They can heal. Even the smallest ones can have a huge impact, changing the shape of reality in the space of a heartbeat.

Mom is gone.

Words have resonance and associated connotations. Let them linger. Savor them on the tongue. Remember they are metamorphic, symbols of things and always transitioning. Take the word gay. Once a happy-go-lucky fellow, it is now often spoken in the dramatic stage whisper with accompanying shifty-eye syndrome. Is it a bad word? George Carlin assured us there are no bad words. “There are bad thoughts, bad intentions. And…words!” I would apply the same principle here. There are little ideas and petty intentions, and then there are…words.

One little word can change the meaning of an entire document…for example, when “I” becomes “we," responsibilities shift. Lives are irrevocably altered when moving out becomes moving in. Or I love you becomes I love him. As for the littlest words, the all too common articles, “a, an, the”, well…as the Doctor told Harry Sullivan, “You might be a doctor, but I’m the Doctor. The definite article, you might say.”

One little word is all it takes to turn a positive into a negative. Yes or no. String three little words together and you might just change the world. Yes, we can! No, we can’t. I did it. You did it. This means something.

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This is my entry for Round 2/Topic 2 of LJ Idol at [livejournal.com profile] therealljidol. The BBC would like you to know that other entries are available on this topic and you can find them HERE!

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-28 06:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baxaphobia.livejournal.com
Sometimes the fewer words the greater the impact. Nicely done.

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Date: 2011-10-28 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Thank you. I hope it has the desired impact on people. It does make a bit of a change from my last entry.

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Date: 2011-10-29 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] from-the-pit.livejournal.com
Oh nice! I really like how you did this!

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Date: 2011-10-29 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sweeny-todd.livejournal.com
Time is fleeting.

Total Rocky Horror flash!

love the Dr Who reference ^_^

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-29 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Thank you. I've been wondering it is a little too clinical, though. The truth is I have to learn to share more personal stuff as a blogger. Those entries draw out the vote, I think. But I'm shy and not used to sharing much. Still, happy you liked it.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-29 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Madness takes its toll.

Let's do the Time Warp Agaaaaaain!

Apparently, we share an interest in time and Timelords. Or cult oeuvre. Glad you liked the Doctor Who reference. It is one of my favorites. Because I'm a word nerd, no doubt.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-29 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] from-the-pit.livejournal.com
I think it's wonderful! Sometimes sharing takes time.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-29 06:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sweeny-todd.livejournal.com
no doubt at all ^_^

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-29 07:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] basric.livejournal.com
Well spoken, umm...written.

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Date: 2011-10-29 12:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-17bingo.livejournal.com
All of this is absolutely true. Nicely put.

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Date: 2011-10-29 12:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theafaye.livejournal.com
So, so true.

And I am glad you stuck to the spirit of the BBC - always love that little backpedal DJs do when talking about a product!

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-29 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Thank you. I, also, get a giggle out of the back sell statement, "other fine products are available," that the BBC requires.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-29 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Like minds and all that. Thank you so much for the comments here and there.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-29 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Stated...or rather...conveyed. :grin: Thank you so much. I'm please you enjoyed it.

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Date: 2011-10-29 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noodledays.livejournal.com
nice mix of phrases you used.

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Date: 2011-10-29 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Thank you. I wanted the reader to reflect on the way three little words can change the entire outlook or direction of a conversation.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-29 09:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myrna-bird.livejournal.com
This was neat. I like it.

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Date: 2011-10-29 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] n3m3sis42.livejournal.com
I really enjoyed this! Incidentally, while it might (heh) not be the most original thing ever, that poem you wrote as a kid was pretty cute. :)

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-29 11:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm delighted to hear that you enjoyed my entry. And my kid poem stands proudly. I'm just happy my Mom kept it for me. There is an incredibly bad painting of a cat on the same page, which I imagine she put up on our refrigerator at the time.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-30 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Thank you, birdie!

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-30 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mstrobel.livejournal.com
I loved how clever this is :D

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-31 01:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Thank you very much. I'm glad you loved it for its mind. :grin:

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-31 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wolfden.livejournal.com
Nicely done.

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Date: 2011-10-31 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whipchick.livejournal.com
So many different facets here!

(no subject)

Date: 2011-10-31 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zeitgeistic.livejournal.com
LOL at us both posting our old poetry.

I liked this entry!

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-01 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Thank you.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-01 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
I tried to touch on a few different notes, without overwhelming the reader. Happy it worked for you.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-01 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
I know. Great minds and all that. Glad you liked the entry. Thanks for stopping by the old LJ.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-01 02:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] notodette.livejournal.com
I really liked this. It was scattered and collected at the same time.

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Date: 2011-11-01 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
I'd notice that. I wasn't sure that it was a plus, but feedback has been positive, so I suppose it is. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-01 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] belenen.livejournal.com
beautifully illustrates the power of words, loved it.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-01 09:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixiebelle.livejournal.com
Words do carry so much power. Once they are said, they are out there... And they can have so much impact. It can make or break a friendship, one little word can change an entire sentence... They have power. People should appreciate them more.

Great entry!

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-02 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] java-fiend.livejournal.com
Words have more power than a lot of people give them credit for. I love this entry. Well done.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-02 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
I'm happy to hear that you love it. Thanks.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-02 01:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
I really am a word nerd. I enjoy learning their origins and how they change meaning. I love the connotations people have with certain words, like some people hate the word "moist."

I so glad that you enjoyed my entry.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-02 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Yes. We don't consider the deeper meaning behind words as often as we might need to, I think. And hence the entry. I am thrilled that you loved it. Thanks.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-02 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixiebelle.livejournal.com
Haha yes! Moist! That was mentioned in Dead Like Me! I never thought about that before. I find that stuff fascinating as well :)

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-02 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liret.livejournal.com
This made me think of the Mark Twain line about how the difference between an almost-right word and the right word is like the difference between a lightning bug and the lightning.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-02 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Yes! A great quote that and it does rather capture the spirit of this entry.

Put another way by the great Terry Pratchett, in my favorite quote by him, "If you give a man a fire he's warm for one night. If you set a man on fire, he's warm for the rest of his life."

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-02 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phoenixejc.livejournal.com
I like your take on the topic very much. Well done!

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-03 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nyxocity.livejournal.com
Nicely done! I really enjoyed the way you put this together and showed the way even just three words can make such a big difference.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-03 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karmasoup.livejournal.com
Okay, the piece was pretty cool, but then you threw geek references on top of it, and took it from nicely done to
$#@%!^& Awesome! Thanks!

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-03 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Thank you. I appreciate your support!

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-03 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Thanks. Reading through all of the entries, I see that my opening might have been a little cliched, but I hoped I had something to say about the topic, at least. I'm happy you enjoyed the full effect.

(no subject)

Date: 2011-11-03 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabid1st.livejournal.com
Geeks United!

*snicker*

I wonder how many people get the Close Encounters reference at the end? Or, for that matter, how many people know who Harry Sullivan is?

Thank you so much for your AWESOME comment.

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