Uh-oh is right! We must see what we see about that key. And thank you so much for the compliment on my transitions...Kes, my beta babe, rode me about them in this chapter...claiming the change in tone was too startling, too abrupt. I tried to spackle over it...but I wasn't sure I had it completely smooth. I sorely needed Kathea or Aibhinn this round...but they were both suffering through RL trials. So, I pressed on with two betas and my own sense of flow.
I had debated losing this chapter all together...but I wanted to address the Isolus issue and Rose's expanding knowledge of Gallifreyan. Also, with all due respect to Moffatt...I like MY explanation of why the TARDIS looks different now than it did better than "you changed the desktop theme." Of course, the way Ten lingered on that, "Yeah..." I think he may have been lying to avoid an argument.
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I had debated losing this chapter all together...but I wanted to address the Isolus issue and Rose's expanding knowledge of Gallifreyan. Also, with all due respect to Moffatt...I like MY explanation of why the TARDIS looks different now than it did better than "you changed the desktop theme." Of course, the way Ten lingered on that, "Yeah..." I think he may have been lying to avoid an argument.
Anyway...thanks for the feedback. :hugs:
Rae